Hi I'm pretty new here but I've been writing FFs for a while. I first started with FFs about John Stevens ( Season 3 Top 6 )Then season 4 I wrote a lot of stories about Canthony( Carrie Underwood obviously the winner and Anthony Fedorov( 4th place) ) . Season 5 I started a fic about Will Makar ( Didn't make the top 12) but that didn't go very far. I took a break from AI fics and started to write FFs about Jesse McCartney ( 2005- 2007) . Late last year . I started to write fics about the Jonas Brothers I still do but this is an experiment on how well I do writing about David.

Now that I got that out of the way without further ado here's my fic “Singing the Lyrics Of Jealously"

I'll post the first part when I know have 2 or more readers.


thanks for reading all that :) please comment

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Chapter 1

Delaney’s POV

I sat in my room waiting for our new neighbors to arrive.
I guess my dad had met them at the grocery store earlier that day. All I knew about them was that they had five kids and the second oldest was my age.
I lived my dad and my uncle. You might be wondering where my mom is. You see my parents are divorced but I see my mom very often.
Anyone lost, if so I will introduce myself before I continue.

I’m Delaney, I’m 11, about 5’0, with bright hazel eyes, light brown hair I can be shy when you first meet me but once you get to know me I’m pretty outgoing and chatty, I’m a pretty good listener whenever someone has a problem they can come to me, I’m sensitive, sweet, I can be sarcastic sometimes.

However, I digress I will continue the story.

As I said, I was in my room waiting for our new neighbors to arrive
“Delaney!”
“Yes?”
“Come out, our new neighbors are here”
“Coming”
“Delaney, this is Mr. & Mrs. Archuleta “
“Nice to meet you “
“You too”
A girl around 12 cleared her throat.
“This is our oldest Claudia, she’s 12”
“Nice to meet you ““You too”
I looked next to her to lock eyes with a boy around my age with beautiful hazel eyes.
“This is David, he’s your age “
“Nice to meet you “
“You too” he whispered shyly
“He’s a little shy,” Claudia, told me
“Oh, okay”
“This is Daniel, he’s 8”
“Nice to meet you Daniel”
“You too” he said cutely
“Where are you’re other two?” my dad asked
“Home , we left them with a babysitter”
“Oh, Delaney why don’t you take David to your room”

“Okay”
“Why don’t we go to the living room” said my dad leading Mr. & Mrs. Archuleta to the living room
“Follow me “
“Okay”
We walked to my room.

I hope I got his siblings names and ages right . please review :)

P to the M to the S!!!!

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awww... this is cute so far!!! post more!! lol

and i love how ur going back b4 American Idol, when he was eleven!! aww..

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ill reveiw again, b/c i love this story!!!!!!! plz add more!!!

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We sat in silence until I broke it.
“So, where did you move from?”
“Utah”
“Awesome, what school are you going to?”
“Lowell Elementary”
“Cool, what grade are you in?”
“I’m in 5th,” David said
“Cool, I’m in 6th “
“Okay”
“You’ll have Miss Samuels as a teacher she’s really nice “
“Cool, when‘s your birthday? ”
“August 12th”
“Cool, my birthday was yesterday “
“Happy late birthday”
“Thanks”
We continued to talk.
“David , it time to go !” yelled Mrs. Archuleta
“Coming, mom!”
“Bye , Delaney “ he said giving me a hug
“Bye , David”
He smiled at me as he walked away.

David’s POV

I walked out of Delaney’s room and walked home with my family.
“You get to see Delaney , again in three days"
“Yay!”
“You have a crush on her , don’t you?” my mom asked
“I just met her , mom”
“Still”
The day continued.
Three days later , we were on Delaney’s doorstep again.
“Come on in “ said Delaney’s dad
“Hey David”
“Hey Delaney” I smiled
“So , did you stay up last night?”
“I tried , but I fell asleep”
“Yeah, me too”
Before I could reply two kids walked up to Delaney.

awww... cute!! i love haw little David has a little crush!! lol

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oh i like!!!!!!! keep going!!!!!!!!!! and i thought claudia was more than just a year older than archie? i could be wrong but just a thought.

“David, these are my cousins Austin & Aubrey”
“Nice to meet you “
“You too”
“How old are you two?”
“I’m 7, “ said Austin
“My brother is a year older than you”
“I’m 6”
“My little sister Jazzy is a year younger than you “
Her eyes lit up.
“Girls, have cooties don’t make me play with her,” Austin complained
“Come on, Austin” said Aubrey grabbing Austin by the arm and dragging him towards Daniel and Jazzy
“Haha, they’re cute”
“Yeah, let’s go to my room”
“Okay”
We walked to her room.
“Do you still believe girls have cooties?”
“If I did why would you be my only friend?”
“Haha true”
“So you nervous about starting school”
“Actually, I’m excited but I bet you’re nervous”
“Yeah, terrified “
“Don’t worry you’ll have me “ she said taking my hand in comfort
“Yeah”
She smiled.
“So, is it just your dad and your uncle here?”
“Yes”
“If you don’t mind me asking where’s your mom?”
Her smile faded as she said, “ My parents are divorced”
“Oh” I said realizing that I had brought up a tough topic
“Don’t worry , my parents still get along and I still see my mom often”
“Okay, if you ever ”
“You want to play a game or something ?”
“Sure”
“I have Life , Monopoly and Chutes and Ladders”
“How about Life”
“Okay, I’m going to get something to drink you want something?”
“Sure, what do you have? ”
“Caprisun , juice , soda and water”
“I’ll have a Caprisun”
“Okay, I’ll be right back”
“Okay”
She walked out of her room.

Delaney’s POV

I walked to the kitchen to get the drinks.
“Did you offer David something to drink?” my dad asked
“Way ahead of you “

“Okay”
I got two Caprisuns and walked to my room.
“Thanks, Delaney “
“No problem , let me get the game “
“Okay”
I got the game and we started to play.
“David , its tine to go!” yelled Mrs. Archuleta
“Coming mom!”
“Bye David”
“Bye Delaney “ he smiled giving me a hug
“I’ll see you on Monday”
“Olay, bye”
“Bye”
He walked away.
“Hey Delaney, how do you feel about walking with David to the bus stop on Monday?”
“I would love that , does David know?”
“Lupe is going to ask him tonight “
“Okay”
“You two really hit it off , didn’t you ?”
“Yeah, we did”
A few minutes later, the phone rang.
“What does Delaney think ?” I heard Mrs. Archuleta ask
“She’s excited , what about David?”
“I don’t think he’s ever been this excited to go to school”
“Haha, our kids really hit it off”
“Yeah, they did “
The day continued.
I woke up on Monday in a great mood.
I quickly got dressed and ate breakfast.
“Hi Delaney “ said David
“Hey David “
“You better hurry up , kids the bus arrives in about 10 minutes and it takes five minutes to walk there,” said my dad “
“Bye dad” I said hugging him
“Bye Mr. Romero”
“Bye, kids”
We walked out of the house.
“Is this your first time you’ve walked to the bus stop?”
“Yeah, my dad won’t let me walk to it alone so he drops me off everyday at school”
“Why did he let you walk with me?”
“The obvious answer is that I’m not alone”
“Oh, right”
We continued walking to the bus stop.
“Hey Delaney !” yelled my friend Leah
“Hey Leah”
“Who’s this?”
“This is David , my new neighbor “
“Nice to meet you, David “
“You too” he said shyly
“He’s a bit shy”
“Okay, how old are you?”
“I’m 11”
“Cool, you’ll be in our grade “
“Actually , I’ll be in 5th”
“Okay, cool”
Before one of us could say something the bus pulled up and we got in.
David was behind me, one of the kids tripped him, and he fell on his face.
I rushed to his side and helped him up to see that his lip was bleeding.

I like it!!!!!

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nice fic!

i like it!

its interesting that you put david before ai.

pms! wms!